A textbook case of bad writing

From grammar to syntax, Nepali textbooks, even those prescribed by expensive schools, read awful.

“I am going to attend NGO CSW67 Forum in New York, NY, USA. Which is going to held from 6th March to 17th March 2023 in New York.” Thus began the by-now infamous letter by the Deputy Speaker of the House of Representatives, Indira Rana, to the US Embassy in Kathmandu requesting an early visa interview date. The missive itself was addressed to “The counselor General” at the embassy, seemingly a position that exists at the American embassy here but is unknown anywhere else in the world.